今昔对比的英语作文？The earth is our homeland,so we must protect it. The earth used to be very nice,but now it becomes worse and worse.总说，对比今昔，For example:the land is sandy,the river is dirty,the air is less clean,even the temperature is rising建议把River用复数，那么，今昔对比的英语作文？一起来了解一下吧。
RE: Saving the Earth
The earth is our homeland, so we must protect it .It used to be very nice ,but now worsing .For example :land sanded ,river polluted and air uncleaned that could cause temperature rised.Or we will have no place to live ,we don't save our earth right now.but what should we do by now ?In my opinion, we should plant more trees and collect the rubbish into the dustbins .Then we also hvae to take measures to change the conditions of factories :wasted water should be prohibited ,polluted air should be decresed,at the same time ,grow flowers and plants are needed.because it is good for our health .In a word ,only one earth we have that we must do our best to pretect it .
Remark :写作时要注意连词的使用，及句子简洁，时态问题。
Once, I was a young child, but today a sensible intelligent students; once I was in the tower of ivory lollipops, fantasy grew up to like, today has become a mature young; I still do all things blindly, but today to put these things into the blind something useful. Yesterday, I still calculate 1+1 equals 2, today I can count on the Olympic mathematics problem; yesterday I was back" electro house, hear birds singing everywhere." Today it is back on the hard to understand the ancient prose, poetry; yesterday I was back in ABCDEFG, today is learning how to understand words; yesterday, I was still wearing slippers full wall kicked, but today I am holding the brush in the brush shoes ... If ever give me a piece of paper, I will think about examination paper the answer to steal it, now I will think about how to do, that my own strength; if gave me a glass ball, I will be thinking of how to play to have fun, and I would think of glass ball is made of how ... I'm not who I was, I had the revolutionary capital, there is the upward force, with confidence and determination to meet future challenges!
For example:
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the air is less clean,有点中式英语。。
even the temperature is rising，前面＋个and吧，连接顺畅一点。。
rising后面的省略号英语的省略号只有3点。。
What shall we do to save her ， her改为it
we have only one earth we should , 在earth后面加个so去连接
总体来说的话，我会给你13分。。
虽然不是很专业。。
有么??写作文的时候多用些新颖的词句,吸引老师的眼球,多用些倒装句之类的句子,也可以使文章丰富起来,分也随之变多哦...
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子： obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语： to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型： thus, it can be concluded that…, therefore, we can find that…
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